Manuscript Editing Services
Working on your dream book and finally ready for an editor? I am here to not only be a source of critical feedback but also a cheerleader to help you fall in love with your story over and over again.
I am a developmental editor - a collaborative creative partner who will help bring your manuscript to the next level. As a fellow author, I understand the writing experience first-hand, which is why I am so passionate about helping you create your vision between the words.
Developmental Editing Evaluates:
Plot progression & consistency
Genre expectations
Character arc development (Motivations, relationships, internal conflict, etc.)
Pacing from entire manuscript to scene level
How Tension & Conflict drive the story forward
World-building integration (if applicable)
Immersive experience for readers (sensory details, narrative distance, evoking strong emotion)
Analyze how to connect story elements to create a cohesive and compelling manuscript that fits your vision!
Why Chose Me As Your Editor?
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I’ve taken an EFA class on Developmental Editing for Fiction where I edited manuscripts with guidance from a professional
I am an author myself. I know how it feels to be on the other end, which is why I handle your book with the same love as my own
I have two years of experience writing my debut novel, self-editing between 6 drafts
I have experience beta reading and editing manuscripts of fellow writers
I dive into the small details of your story and find connections from a new perspective to become your brainstorming partner!
My goal is for you to get excited about revision and fall in love with your story more
My Developmental Editing Services Include:
Free 1,000-word edit sample of your manuscript
Video chat/phone call discussing expectations, desires, getting to know each other and your story
In-manuscript comments on developmental edits
Midpoint check-in over email
Final Editorial letter detailing strengths and areas to consider
Final video chat/call to recap all edits and brainstorm future action!
How Much Does it Cost?
My rates are lower than the industry standard because I am a new editor, so we may be a great fit if you are looking for a more budget-friendly option.
My rate is 0.01 cents per word. Rates are negotiable and I’m open to discussing flexible payment options.
I accept short stories, novels, and flash fiction, but I specialize in Fantasy and Romance genre fiction and everything in between. Send over your sample and see if we’re a great fit!
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Working with Lily has been one of the highlights of my writing process as she helped to delve into the terrifying abyss of developmental edits for my dark academia fantasy novel, and from the very beginning, her approach was thoughtful, kind, and incredibly insightful. What really stood out to me was how she didn’t try to fix the book for me — instead, she asked the kind of questions that made me think differently about my characters, plot, and themes. Half the time I found myself wondering, “How did she even think to ask that?” in the best possible way. Her in-line comments were a great balance of critique and encouragement — not just pointing out what wasn’t working, but also celebrating the parts that were. On top of that, she wrote a short editorial letter after each chapter, summarizing what she thought was happening. It might sound simple, but that helped me realize what was actually making it onto the page… and what wasn’t. That kind of perspective is hard to get on your own. It meant a lot to be her client, and I feel lucky to have had her on my side during this extremely difficult part of the journey.
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